martes, 10 de febrero de 2009

my holidays summer

My family every summer go to Calp.I like going to the beach and playing voleyball,swimming in the sea with my friends.My brother and I go to the apartament near the beach.I like to party the saturday.In the summer go to Terra Mitica but I`m going with my parents and is a bit boring.be at the beach fun!!!!!
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  1. Melissa15 de febrero de 2009, 13:33

    Hi Lorena! Thanks for posting this paragraph about your summers. Here are my corrections:

    EVERY SUMMER My family (every summer) goES to Calp.I like going to the beach and playing voLleyball AND swimming in the sea with my friends. My brother and I go to the apPartament near the beach. I like to GO TO partIES ON (the) Saturday. In the summer, I go to Terra Mitica but SINCE I (`m going) GO with my parents (and) IT is a bit boring. IT'S FUN (be) at the beach (fun)!!!!!

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